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Abstract
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Introduction
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s/ In addition, TLS sessions are terminated prematurely at some middlebox (such as a load balancer). / In addition, TLS sessions may be terminated prematurely at some middlebox (such as a load balancer).
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s/ Because of these weaknesses, several attacks to the protocol such as Redirection URI rewrite has been put forward by now. / Because of these weaknesses, several attacks against the protocol, such as Redirection URI rewriting, has been discovered.
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s/ Further, the request by reference allows the reduction of over-the- wire overhead. / Furthermore, the request by reference allows the reduction of over-the- wire overhead.
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s/ containment / confidentiality protection
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##19.7 Dropping WAP reference
Maybe you want to drop mentioning of WAP since it is probably not that important anymore
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s/ There are other potential formats that could be used for this purpose instead of JWT [RFC7519]. / The JWT encoding has been chosen because of
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s/cacheing/caching
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s/sepcification/specification
s/peform/perform
Section 11.2.1 Request Disclosure
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s/poteintially/potentially
s/borwser/browser
s/corrilating/correlating
Section 12 Acknowledgements
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s/ Follwoing people contributed to the creation of this document in OAuth WG. (Affiliations at the time of the contribution is used.) / The following people contributed to the creation of this document in the OAuth WG. (Affiliations at the time of the contribution are used.)
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Re: 19.7
IMHO, it is still relevant in many countries. Overall penetration of the SmartPhone in the world is only about 35% [SOURCE: http://qz.com/418769/theres-still-plenty-of-money-in-dumb-phones/]
While inside IETF, feature phones and WAP phones seems to be extinct, in the real world, it is not, especially in developing countries.
So, I propose to keep it.
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19.7 Hanness agreed to keep WAP reference after Nat pointed out that over 50% of phones in the wild are still WAP/Feature phones.
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