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The Market is in the town area. "Amid the hustle and bustle of the market is the forlorn sight of the empty greengrocer's stand."
-There is a thing called hustle and bustle. "The market is crowded with people streaming by, doing their daily business."
+There are plural-named improper-named people called the crowd. "The market is crowded with people streaming by, doing their daily business."
The empty greengrocer's stand is a scenery supporter in the market. "The stand is empty of its usual heaps of fruits and vegetables. It looks like the greengrocer never even set it up this morning."