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README.pdf copy edits
Issue #93
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[Installing KBar]
- "On Mac OSX Drag" --> "On Mac OS X, drag" or "On macOS, drag" if you want to use the new-style Apple uses to reference their OS.
- "On Windows go" --> "On Windows, go"
- "kbar-1.0.zxp" --> "kbar-1.0.0.zxp" (unsure how specific you want to get each time you put out a release)
[Starting KBar]
- "menu and click" --> "menu, then click"
- "switch toolbars right click" --> "switch toolbars, right-click"
- periods for both bullets
[Configuring KBar]
- will user know what the "panel menu" means? hopefully.
- "right click" --> "right-click"
- sentence-ending period
[Buttons Tab]
- i usually put a comma after the intro "To ..." and before the step (e.g., "To reorder buttons, just ..."), but up to you.
- "click on it" --> "click it" (click usually implies doing the action on something)
- self-evident how to delete a button or toolbar? or you could combine with the last bullet as "To rename or delete ..."?
[Settings Tab]
- "the Import/Export buttons" --> "the Import/Export Toolbars"
"Getting Support on KBar" --> "Getting Support for KBar"?
Comments (5)
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reporter -
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Resolved.
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reporter for the README.pdf released today (RC2?), a few things were missed...
[Installing KBar]
- "kbar-1.0.zxp" --> "kbar-1.0.0.zxp" (unsure how specific you want to get each time you put out a release)
[Starting KBar]
- "right click" --> "right-click"
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Thanks Jeff. It looks like I exported the wrong pdf file into the zip that had these specific fixes in them. Will update accordingly.
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reporter fyi, the comments from July 4 still apply to the version of the README.pdf included with the first-released version. probably expected given README.pdf is dated 6/28/17.
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