"She doesn't really need much in the way of clothing - and anyone apart from her mate (or harem-sister) or a man she wants to become her mate watching her e.g. take a bath should better be VERY good at dodging bullets..." this actually is a little bit confusing to read and understand, the flow of this sentence feels interrupted a lot too much and that e.g. (example) part doesn't really make since. Are we trying to say that she shoots bullets when she becomes excited or in danger or aroused? This part needs some reworking in my opinion.
