OpenID4VCI: typos in draft 11, from Section 1 to Section 6

[Takahiko Kawasaki]

1. Introduction, the 2nd paragraph

e.g trough cryptographic → e.g. through cryptographic

// Change “e.g” to “e.g.” and “trough” to “through”.

2. Terminology, Biometrics-based holder Binding

Biometrics-based holder Binding → Biometrics-based Holder Binding

// Capitalize “h” of “holder”.

3.3. Core Concepts, the 6th bullet

at each extention point → at each extension point

// Replace the second “t” in “extention” with “s”.

3.3. Core Concepts, the 7th bullet

turn into a verifiable Credential → turn into a Verifiable Credential

// Capitalize “v” of “verifiable”.

3.4. Authorization Code Flow, the 2nd paragraph

the diagram and does not → the diagram does not

// Remove “and”.

3.4. Authorization Code Flow, the 3rd paragraph

(1) The wallet uses → (1) The Wallet uses

// Capitalize “w” of “wallet”.

3.4. Authorization Code Flow, the 6th paragraph

steps (2) and (3) happens → steps (2) and (3) happen

// Remove “s” from “happens”.

3.5. Pre-Authorized Code Flow, the 1st paragraph

Access Toke is than used → Access Token is then used

// Change “Toke” to “Token” and “than” to “then”.

3.5. Pre-Authorized Code Flow, the 5th paragraph

(1) the Credential Issuer → (1) The Credential Issuer

// Capitalize “t” of “the”.

3.5. Pre-Authorized Code Flow, the 8th paragraph

Pre-Authorized Code obtained in step (1) → Pre-Authorized Code obtained in step (2)

// Change “(1)” to “(2)”.

sends a PIN, it has → sends a PIN it has

// Remove “,”.

with the request, → with the request.

// Change “,” to “.”.

3.5. Pre-Authorized Code Flow, the 11th paragraph

a channel different that the issuance Flow → a channel different than the issuance Flow

// Change “that” to “than”.

4.1.1. Credential Offer Parameters, the bullet for pre-authorized_code

MUST be include → MUST be included

// Change “include” to “included”.

4.1.3. Sending Credential Offer by Reference Using credential_offer_uri Parameter, the 1st example

GET /credential_offer.jwt HTTP/1.1 → GET /credential_offer HTTP/1.1

// Remove “.jwt” from the path or replace it with “.json”. The specification requires responses be JSON (not JWT).

4.1.3. Sending Credential Offer by Reference Using credential_offer_uri Parameter, the 2nd example

...credential-offer.jwt → ...credential-offer

// Remove “.jwt” from the path or replace it with “.json”. The specification requires responses be JSON (not JWT).

4.1.3. Sending Credential Offer by Reference Using credential_offer_uri Prameter, the 3rd example

HTTP/1.1 201 OK → HTTP/1.1 200 OK

// Change “201” to “200”.

5.1.3. Additional Request Parameters, the bullet for issuer_state

(see (Section 4.1) → (see Section 4.1)

// Remove “(“ before Section.

5.1.4. Pushed Authorization Request, the example

Remove the indentation of the message body.

5.2. Successful Authorization Response, the example

Remove the indentation of the Location header.

6.1. Token Request, two examples

Remove the indentation of the message body.

6.2. Successful Token Response, the example

Remove the indentation of the message body.

[Torsten Lodderstedt]

thanks a lot! Created PR #460 to incorporate your suggestions. Please review and approve.

[Kristina Yasuda]

PR merged.