OpenID4VCI: typos in draft 11, from Section 7 to the end

[Takahiko Kawasaki]

7.2. Credential Request, the 2nd paragraph

conveyd → conveyed

// Change “conveyd” to “conveyed”.

11.1.4. Credential Lifecycle Management, the 1st paragraph

the Credential Issuer → The Credential Issuer

// Capitalize “t” of “the” at the beginning of the paragraph.

12.3. Multiple Accesses to the Credential Endpoint, the 2nd paragraph

the Credential Issuer → The Credential Issuer

// Capitalize “t” of “the” at the beginning of the paragraph.

is no longer be valid → is no longer valid

// Remove “be”.

12.4. Relationship between the Credential Issuer Identifier in the metadata and the Issuer Identifier in the Issued Credential, the 2nd list item

{#credential-issuer-identifier} → (#credential-issuer-identifier)

// Replace { and } with ( and ) so that the markdown can be processed as intended.

D.2. Credential Offer - Cross-Device (with information pre-submitted by the End-User)

User scans the QR code → The End-User scans the QR code

// Change “User” to “The End-User”

E.1.1.6. Credential Response, the 1st paragraph

MUST be a JSON string → MUST be a JWT

// Change “JSON string” to “JWT”.

E.1.1.6. Credential Response, the example

"format": "ldp_vc" → "format": "json_vc_jwt"

// Change "ldp_vc" to "json_vc_jwt".

E.1.2.2. Credential Issuer Metadata, the 1st paragraph

Appendix E.1.3.2 apply → Appendix E.1.1.2 apply

// Change “E.1.3.2” to “E.1.1.2” (if my guess is correct).

E.1.2.3. Credential Offer, the 1st paragraph

Appendix E.1.3.3 apply → Appendix E.1.1.3 apply

// Change “E.1.3.3” to “E.1.1.3” (if my guess is correct).

E.1.2.4. Authorization Details, the 1st paragraph

Appendix E.1.3.3 apply → Appendix E.1.1.4 apply

// Change “E.1.3.3” to “E.1.1.4” (if my guess is correct).

E.1.2.5. Credential Request, the 1st paragraph

Appendix E.1.3.5 apply → Appendix E.1.1.5 apply

// Change “E.1.3.5” to “E.1.1.5” (if my guess is correct).

E.1.3.3. Credential Offer, the bullet for @context

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

E.2.2. Credential Issuer Metadata, the example, display[1].locale

"jp-JA" → "ja-JP"

// Change "jp-JA" to "ja-JP". “ja” means “Japanese” (language). “JP” means “Japan” (country).

E.2.3. Credential Offer, the bullet for doctype

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

E.2.4. Authorization Details, the bullet for doctype

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

E.2.4. Authorization Details, the bullet for claims

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

E.2.5. Credential Request, the bullet for doctype

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

E.2.5. Credential Request, the bullet for claims

Append a period at the end of the sentence.

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[Tobias Looker]

@Takahiko Kawasaki , thanks I have raised PR https://bitbucket.org/openid/connect/pull-requests/466 however I was struggling to understand what you meant for the following, can you clarify?

E.1.2.2. Credential Issuer Metadata, the 1st paragraph
Appendix E.1.3.2 apply → Appendix E.1.1.2 apply

// Change “E.1.3.2” to “E.1.1.2” (if my guess is correct).

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[Takahiko Kawasaki]

• Appendix E.1.1.x sections are for jwt_vc_json.
• Appendix E.1.2.x sections are for jwt_vc_json-ld.
• Appendix E.1.3.x sections are for ldp_vc.

With the following reasons,

1. Referring to E.1.3.x in E.1.2.x results in referring to what has not been mentioned yet.
2. The content of E.1.2.x (jwt_vc_json-ld) is probably closer to the content of E.1.1.x (jwt_vc_json) than the content of E.1.3.x (ldp_vc).

I guessed that each E.1.2.x section should refer to the corresponding E.1.1.x section instead of the corresponding E.1.3.x section.

[Tobias Looker]

@Takahiko Kawasaki understood, the references are in fact correct for this section as the credential being signed is JSON-LD based. To address your feedback what I have done is re-organised the order so there is no reference to a section before it is defined, please see the updated PR 466

[Kristina Yasuda]

PR merged