SIOP: typos in draft 12, from Section 8 to Section 10

[Takahiko Kawasaki]

8. Subject Syntax Types, Decentralized Identifier subject syntax type

the sub value → the sub Claim value

// Insert “Claim” to align with the description of “JWK Thumbprint subject syntax type”.

{#siop-id_token-validation} → (#siop-id-token-validation)

// Change { to (, } to ), and siop-id_token-validation to siop-id-token-validation. (markdown issue)

9. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Request, client_metadata

OpenID Federation 1.0 → OpenID Connect Federation 1.0

// Insert “Connect”.

9. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Request, client_metadata_uri

OpenID Federation 1.0 → OpenID Connect Federation 1.0

// Insert “Connect”.

9. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Request, id_token_type

(see(see Section 11.1) → (see Section 11.1)

// Remove “(see”.

9. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Request, the 5th paragraph

allows RPs to sent → allows RPs to send

// Change “sent” to “send”.

9. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Request, the 7th paragraph

OpenID Federation 1.0 → OpenID Connect Federation 1.0

// Insert “Connect”.

9. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Request, the 9th paragraph

Nested JWTs as defined in [JWT] → Nested JWTs as defined in [!@RFC7519]

// Change “[JWT]” to “[!@RFC7519]". (markdown issue)

9. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Request, the first HTTP 302 example, client_metadata

%22id_token_signing_alg_values_supported%22%3A%5B%22ES256%22%5D → %22id_token_signed_response_alg%22%3A%22ES256%22

// Change id_token_signing_alg_values_supported to id_token_signed_response_alg, %5B%22ES256%22%5D ([“ES256”]) to %22ES256%22 (“ES256”).

9.1. aud of a Request Object, two bullets

the aud claim MUST → The aud Claim MUST

// Capitalize “t” in “the” and “c” in “claim”.

9.2. Cross-Device Self-Issued OpenID Provider Request, the request example, client_metadata

%22id_token_signing_alg_values_supported%22%3A%5B%22ES256%22%5D → %22id_token_signed_response_alg%22%3A%22ES256%22

// Change id_token_signing_alg_values_supported to id_token_signed_response_alg, %5B%22ES256%22%5D ([“ES256”]) to %22ES256%22 (“ES256”).

9.2. Cross-Device Self-Issued OpenID Provider Request, the last paragraph

A RP MAY → An RP MAY or The RP MAY or RPs MAY

// Correct the article.

10. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Response, the 4th paragraph

HTTPS POST → HTTP POST

// Change “HTTPS” to “HTTP”.

10. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Response, the 5th paragraph

sends a HTTP → sends an HTTP

// Change “a” to “an”.

10. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Authorization Response, the response example

Remove the leading white spaces on the Location header.

10.1. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Response (Authorization Code Flow), the response example

Remove indentation of the HTTP headers and the message body.

10.1. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Response (Authorization Code Flow), the last paragraph

provide end-user claims → provide End-User claims

// Capitalize “e” and “u” in “end-user”.

10.2. Cross-Device Self-Issued OpenID Provider Response, the 1st paragraph

using a HTTP → using an HTTP

// Change “a” to “an”.

10.2. Cross-Device Self-Issued OpenID Provider Response, the response example

Remove indentation of the HTTP headers and the message body.

10.3. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Error Response, invalid_client_metadata_uri

in the Self-Issued OpenID Provider request → in the Authorization Request

// Change “Self-Issued OpenID Provider request” to “Authorization Request”.

10.3. Self-Issued OpenID Provider Error Response, the response example

Remove the leading white spaces on the Location header.

[Kristina Yasuda]

PR #514

[Mark Haine]

Migrated to GitHub

https://github.com/openid/SIOPv2