SIOP: typos in draft 12, from Section 11 to Appendix D

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11.1. Self-Issued ID Token Validation, the 1st bullet

issclaims → iss Claim

// Insert a white space and change “claims” to “Claim”.

subclaim → sub claim

// Insert a white space.

11.2. Cross-Device Self-Issued ID Token Validation, the 3rd paragraph

Subject Syntax type → Subject Syntax Type

// Capitalize “t” in “type”.

13.1.2. Additional Data in Verifiable Presentations, the 1st paragraph

W3C Veriable Presentations → W3C Verifiable Presentations

// Change “Veriable” to “Verifiable”.

13.3. Usage of Cross-Device Self-Issued OP for Authentication, the 2nd paragraph

any Verfiable Presentations → any Verifiable Presentations

// Change “Verfiable” to “Verifiable”.

13.3. Usage of Cross-Device Self-Issued OP for Authentication, the 1st bullet

on a terminal devices → on a terminal device

// Change “devices” to “device”.

13.3. Usage of Cross-Device Self-Issued OP for Authentication, the 4th paragraph

Implementors → Implementers

// Change “o” to “e” for consistency.

13.4. Invocation using Private-Use URI Schemes (Custom URL Schemes), the 2nd paragraph

registers a custom URL scheme → registers a custom URI scheme

// Change “URL” to “URI”.

containing custom scheme → containing the custom URI scheme

// Insert “the” and “URI”.

13.4. Invocation using Private-Use URI Schemes (Custom URL Schemes), the 3rd paragraph

Implementors → Implementers

// Change “o” to “e” for consistency.

13.4. Invocation using Private-Use URI Schemes (Custom URL Schemes), the 4th paragraph

a HTTPS URI → an HTTPS URI

// Change “a” to “an”.

15.1. Static Configuration Values of the Self-Issued OPs, the 1st paragraph

two set → two sets

// Change “set” to “sets”.

15.1.2. A Set of Static Configuration Values bound to siopv2://, the 1st paragraph

custom URL scheme → custom URI scheme

// Change “URL” to “URI”.

15.1.3. A Set of Static Configuration Values bound to openid://, the 1st paragraph

custom URL scheme → custom URI scheme

// Change “URL” to “URI”.

15.3. Receiving Cross-Device Responses, the 1st paragraph

OPwill send → OP will send

// Insert a white space.

as a HTTP → as an HTTP

// Change “a” to “an”.

between Self-Issued OPand RP → between Self-Issued OP and RP

// Insert a white space.

Self-Issued OPresponses → Self-Issued OP responses

// Insert a white space.

16. Relationships to Other Documents, the 1st paragraph

this draft → this specification

// Change “draft” to “specification”.

D.7. Cloud Wallet, the 1st paragraph

exchange date → exchange data

// Change “date” to “data”.

HTTPS protected connection → TLS protected connection

// Change “HTTPS” to “TLS”.

D.7. Cloud Wallet, the 2nd paragraph

End-user authentication → End-User authentication

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