Feedback on OIDC4IDA draft from Dima - part 1
Issue #1408
resolved
Abstract:
- add word “protocol” after “OpenId Connect” on the 1st line
- remove word “verified” from “for providing relying parties with verified claims about end-users“
- add the following after “end-users” … ” that have a certain level of verification and/or additional metadata about the claim or the process of verification.”
- replace “or identity assurance and verification. This extension facilitates the verification of the identity of a natural person.” with “for access control, entitlement decisions or input to further verification processes“
Introduction:
- first sentence of Introduction is repeat of first sentence of Abstract. replace “This specification defines an extension to OpenID Connect [OpenID] for providing relying parties with identity information,“ with “This extension to OpenID Connect [OpenID] standardises how relying parties request and receive identity information with additional assurance metadata,”
- update”While authentication is an aspect of an OpenID Connect transaction, assurance is a property of a certain claim or a group of claims” to “While authentication is an aspect of an OpenID Connect transaction, assurance and associated verification and validation details, is a property of a certain claim or a group of claims.”
- remove “by opt-in or similar mechanism”
- remove “therefore“ from “Identity assurance therefore requires a way to convey assurance data“
- remove whole paragraph “Note: This specifications fulfills the criteria for portability and interoperability mechanisms of Digital ID systems as defined in [FATF-Digital-Identity].“
Scope:
- remove plurals from “This specification defines the technical mechanisms to allow relying parties to request verified claims“ so that it is “This specification is a definion the technical mechanism to allow a relying party to request one or more verified claim“
- then add “about the end-user“ immediately after the previous wording
Terms and definitions:
- claim: remove the text “SOURCE” and the associated new line
- identity proofing: add ref for “OP”
- Add new definition for “claim provider” that states it is synonymous with “claims provider” in OIDC Core
- verified claim - should not start with plural “claims”
Comments (6)
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reporter - changed status to open
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reporter -
for Dima’s suggested edit to terms and definitions/identity proofing, OP already has a ref in Introduction section; will stage the change and discuss
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PR#213
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reporter - changed status to resolved
Addressed by PR #213
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Quick review before diving in to make changes:
Introduction:
Scope:
Terms and definitions: