I've not opened bugs for these as don't believe there's any change to any of the meaning, hope that's okay.
Minor improvements to phrasing
Remove reference to SSL
As TLS is listed as required, it doesn't make sense to mention SSL.
Remove 'or applicable' from client supply of customer’s IP address
The client can't (by definition) send the customer's IP address if it is not available. (Equally I can't see any scenario where the customer IP address is available but not applicable)