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usability matters: some rephrasing

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         <h3  id="usability_matters">Why did you do it?</h3>
-        <p>If we forget about the visual presentation, one fundamental flaw of the GeHoL/Scientia paradigm is
-        the way the information is presented.</p>
-        <p>To take one of the most extreme examples, we don't think anyone is helped by this kind of schedule (click on the
-        image to witness it in its full glory):</p>
+        <p>If we look past the purely cosmetic concerns, one fundamental flaw of the GeHoL/Scientia paradigm is
+          the way the information is presented.</p>
 
-        <p>
-        <a href="/media/Cours.png"><img src="/media/cours_truncated.png" width="100%" alt="extreme scheduling" title="GEHOL, Y U NO HELPFUL?!" /></a>
-        </p>
+        <p>To take one of the most extreme examples, we don't think
+          anyone is being helped by this kind of schedule (click on the
+          image to witness it in its full glory):</p>
 
-        <p>
-            Even with a simpler example, extracting useful information from each event box is tiresome and error-prone. Why should people
-            have to convert a week number into a real date ?
-        </p>
-        <p>
-             The purpose of a calendar system is to help you know when some important events occur.
-            Using the <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ICalendar">iCalendar</a> file format is a more useful way for
-            people to retrieve and integrate a schedule in their favorite calendar application.
-        </p>
+        <p><a href="/media/Cours.png"><img src="/media/cours_truncated.png" width="100%" alt="extreme scheduling" title="GEHOL, Y U NO HELPFUL?!" /></a></p>
+
+        <p>Even with a simpler example, extracting useful information from each event box is tiresome and error-prone. Why should people
+          have to convert an arbitrary week number into a real date ?</p>
+        
+        <p>The purpose of a calendar system is to help you know when some important events occur.
+
+          We think people should be able to integrate a schedule
+          in their favorite calendar application.
+
+          Providing an <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ICalendar">iCalendar</a>
+          file is the best way to achieve that.</p>
 
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