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 and run both on Linux and Windows, to show that open source is ready for
 the masses and that it is indeed possible to use open-source programs, to
 recommend them to your friends, and maybe even to contribute to them (not
-necessarily source code, of course). Since the purpose of the series is to
-introduce the world of open-source code to people who are not very familiar
-with it, please spread the world and tell about the meeting to those people
-you know who haven't installed Linux yet or is a heavy user and fan of
-open-source proprams (although people like that are also welcome to attend).
+necessarily by actual programming, of course). Since the purpose of the series 
+is to introduce the world of open-source code to people who are not very 
+familiar
+with it, please spread the word about the meeting to those people
+you know who haven't installed Linux yet, or aren't heavy users or fans of
+open-source programs.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-In the next meeting which will take place two weeks later 
-(Sunday, 22-November-2009), Ori Idan will talk about what actually are free 
-software and open-source: what are the guiding principles behind free software,
-why is it good, important and helpful for users, but also for developers, and
-also why it doesn't contradict any Capitalistic principles. Moreover, we will
-explain in this meeting on what are actually operating systems, and a few
-things that make Linux special out of being an operating system that is
-managed in an open-source fashion.
+In the next meeting, which will take place two weeks later 
+(Sunday, the 22nd of November, 2009), Ori Idan will talk about what actually 
+are free software and open-source: what are the guiding principles behind free 
+software, why is it good, important, and helpful for users (but also for 
+developers), and also why it doesn't contradict any Capitalistic principles. 
+Moreover, in this meeting, we will explore Linux as a 100% open source
+operating system, and some things that its open-source nature enables.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-After this meeting, we hope to conduct a few Satellite meetings about topics
+After this meeting, we hope to conduct a few satellite meetings about topics
 such as "Open Source Development Tools", "How to Install and experiment with 
-Linux" and other topics. Everyone are welcome to come and invite other people.
+Linux" and others. Everyone is welcome to come and invite other people.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-The meetings will take start at 18:00 and will take place in the Holcblat
-("הולצבלט" in Hebrew), hall No. 007 in the main corridor of the Exact Sciences
+The meetings will start at 18:00 and will take place in the Holcblat
+("הולצבלט" in Hebrew), hall no. 007 in the main corridor of the Exact Sciences
 building in Tel Aviv University. More information can be found in the
 hyper-links above.
 </p>