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 place a few weeks after Sukkoth. <a href="http://blog.oriidan.info/">Ori
 Idan</a> has already volunteered to give the presentation about the
 philosophy of open source software. After these two presentations, we intend
-to give several secondary talks among them "Free Development Tools for
-Linux and Windows" (a general overview of them, and not only those that
-are intended only for C or for Java), as well as "Don't be afraid of
-the command-line" where we will show how nifty the command-line can be.
-So we're looking for volunteers to present these talks, as well.
+to give several secondary talks. Among them would be 
+"Free Development Tools for Linux and Windows" (a general overview of them, 
+and not only those that are intended only for C or for Java), as well as 
+"Don't be afraid of the command-line" where we will show how nifty the
+command-line can be. So we're looking for volunteers to present these 
+talks, as well.
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