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Restructe the explanation

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 Very much inspired by what
 <a href="https://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Peter_Ustinov">Peter Ustinov</a> said
 that “If Botticelli were alive today he’d be working for Vogue.” (which was
-a praise of the then held-in-much-contempt “Vogue” magazine, but taking it
-a little further. I hope Ms. Grimmie is not offended by me comparing her (who
-despite her early low-quality cover videos) is almost entirely perfectly
+a praise of the then held-in-much-contempt “Vogue” magazine). However,
+I am taking it a little further. I hope Ms. Grimmie is not offended by me
+comparing her (who despite her early low-quality cover videos) is almost
+entirely perfectly
 normal and wonderful in any way, to
-<a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ayn_Rand">Ayn Rand</a> whose words and
-deeds and personal life, both exhibited many issues that are seem appalling
-in 2014, and were often quite objectionable then, but my point is that both
-Ayn Rand
-at the time and Grimmie now, are at the cutting-edge of influencing the
-world and taking it forward instead of backward (despite
-whatever faults they both had or have). Back in Ayn Rand’s time books and
-the early Hollywood feature films (that most of which seem incredibly boring
-and tedious today) were the primary vehicle for influence. In this day and age,
-however, songs and other videos on YouTube, especially by “independent” cover
-artists, are what bring the most long-term (and usually positive) influence
-among the people who matter most (= the “Alphas”).
+<a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ayn_Rand">Ayn Rand</a> whose words,
+deeds, and personal life, both exhibited many issues that are seem appalling
+in 2014, and were often quite objectionable even back then.
+</p>
+
+<p>
+My point is that both Ayn Rand at the time and Christina Grimmie now, are at
+the cutting-edge of influencing the world and taking it forward instead of
+backward (despite whatever faults they both had or have). Back in Ayn Rand’s
+time books and the early Hollywood feature films (that most of which seem
+incredibly boring and tedious today) were the primary vehicle for influence. In
+this day and age, however, songs and other videos on YouTube, especially by
+“independent” cover artists, are what bring the most long-term (and usually
+positive) influence among the people who matter most (= the “Alphas”).
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