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 Jennifer is a trendy and popular high school senior who is living and
-studying in the vicinity of Los Angeles. Her best friend, Taylor convinces her
-to attempt to become a developer of open source software. Taylor puts her
+studying in the vicinity of Los Angeles. Her best friend, Taylor, convinces her
+to try to become a developer of open source software. He puts her
 under the tutorship of a different friend of his, the female open source
 contributor Eve, who prefers to be called “Erisa”, and who is a self-conscious
 and rebelling punk, with whom Jennifer finds it hard to deal. Jennifer remains