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Shlomi Fish committed 576e149

Fix a word and some capitalisation.

Thanks to subanark.

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lib/screenplay-xml/txt/selena-mandrake-the-slayer.txt

 
 <s id="selenas-18s-birthday-party" title="Selena’s 18th Birthday Party">
 
-[Selena is standing near a cake with 18 lighten candles, and the number 18 on
+[Selena is standing near a cake with 18 lit candles, and the number 18 on
 it, surrounded by many of her friends.]
 
-The crowd: happy birthday, Selena!
+The crowd: Happy birthday, Selena!
 
 [ Selena blows the candles in a few tries. ]
 
-The crowd: many returns of the day. [Selena is smiling, says “Thank you”
+The crowd: Many returns of the day. [Selena is smiling, says “Thank you”
 and walks away.]
 
 [Matthew approaches Selena]
 
-Matthew: birthday kiss? [Selena smiles and they kiss.]
+Matthew: Birthday kiss? [Selena smiles and they kiss.]
 
-Selena: well, I'm gonna go to the kitchen for a while — feel free to cut
+Selena: Well, I'm gonna go to the kitchen for a while — feel free to cut
 the cake.
 
 [Selena walks away.]
 out some refreshmeats and arranges them on the table and then she opens
 a cupboard's door only to discover a small human like demon inside.]
 
-Selena: why, hello there! I guess you did not RSVP.
+Selena: Why, hello there! I guess you did not RSVP.
 
 Mephiqoleth: MAGEIA!
 
-Selena: judging by the recent happenings, I guess that's me.
+Selena: Judging by the recent happenings, I guess that's me.
 
-+++: so what do you shall I write on your name tag?
++++: So what do you shall I write on your name tag?
 
 Mephiqoleth: MY NAME IS MEPHIQOLETH.
 
-Selena: oh. Is it Emm, Ee, Pee...
+Selena: Oh. Is it Emm, Ee, Pee...
 
 Mephiqoleth: it is written in Leshon Haqodesh.
 
 
 Mephiqoleth: THERE ARE JEWS OF MANY SPECIES.
 
-Selena: really? That's great - can I have a Jewish lady cat? I want one
+Selena: Really? That's great - can I have a Jewish lady cat? I want one
 so she can mother cute little Jewish kittens.
 
 [Cut to Mephiqoleth - he is not amused.]
 
-Selena: you are not amused, demons are never amused. I should have known
-that.
+Selena: You are not amused, demons are never amused. I should have learned
+that by now.
 
-+++: anyway, what is it you want from me?
++++: Anyway, what is it you want from me?
 
 Mephiqoleth: MAGEIA, YOU ARE NOW EIGHT AND TEN YEARS OLD - YOU ARE NOW A
 WOMAN.
 
-Selena: so I've suddenly become a woman at 18? I'm only one day older than
+Selena: So I've suddenly become a woman at 18? I'm only one day older than
 yesterday, and I had my period for many years now, and…
 
 Mephiqoleth: YOU MUST TEST ME! I POSSESS POWERFUL MYSTICAL POWERS, AND YOU
 MUST SEE IF THEY ARE POWERFUL ENOUGH FOR YOU.
 
-Selena: they are. I believe you.
+Selena: They are. I believe you.
 
 Mephiqoleth: NOT SO QUICKLY. MY GREATEST MYSTICAL POWER, WHICH FEW OTHER DEMONS
-POSSESS IS MY TELEPORTATION ABILITY. I CAN TELEPORT YOU ANYWHERE.
+POSSESS, IS MY TELEPORTATION ABILITY. I CAN TELEPORT YOU ANYWHERE.
 
-Selena: you can? Like where?
+Selena: You can? Like where?
 
 Mephiqoleth: ANYWHERE YOU WANT!
 
 
 Mephiqoleth: YOU DO NOT MEAN… <b>THE AMBER!</b>.
 
-Selena: yes, the Amber. The Amber being…
+Selena: Yes, the Amber. The Amber being…
 
 Mephiqoleth: …THE MYSTICAL CENTRE OF THE UNIVERSE AND BEYOND.
 
-Selena: yes.
+Selena: Yes! Smashing!
 
 Mephiqoleth: YOU WILL LIKELY NOT SURVIVE THE AMBER.
 
-Selena: oh try me.
+Selena: Oh try me.
 
-Mephiqoleth: very well.
+Mephiqoleth: Very well.
 
-Selena: just one thing, can you please wait with teleporting me to
+Selena: Just one thing, can you please wait with teleporting me to
 <b>the Amber</b> until Spring break, so I can get ready and safely
 return back home.
 
 
 [Mephiqoleth fades away into thin air leaving Selena amused.]
 
-Selena: well, I suppose a one way trip to the Amber is also a fine Birthday
+Selena: Well, I suppose a one way trip to the Amber is also a fine Birthday
 present. [She smiles]
 
 Jessica’s voice from the main hall: Selena, is everything OK, why aren't you
 coming back? Don't you want some cake.
 
-Selena: yes, sorry, I'm coming, I'm coming. [She takes the trays and leaves
+Selena: Yes, sorry, I'm coming, I'm coming. [She takes the trays and leaves
 the frame]
 
 </s>