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 Gadzia: wow! Q, "The Invisible" has children?
 
-Kira: well, duh! The prophets spoke of several of The Invisible's childern and their whereabouts.
-
-Gadzia: Major, you and I need to talk someday about that "duh".
+Kira: well, duh! The prophets spoke of several of The Invisible's children and their whereabouts.
+
+Gadzia: Major, you and I will need to talk someday about that "duh".
 
 [Kira bursts into laughter.]
 
 Avigayil: sounds good. The whole mission from Deep Space Nine can go with you,
 I'll notify Kahless. He's a big fan of a lot of you.
 
-Amanda: OK, let's summon Katie and her gang of no-goodnicks too. She won't 
+Amanda: OK, let's summon Katie and her gang of no-goodnicks too. She wouldn't
 want to miss it.
 
-Quark: yes, and it's high time we merged the two sub-plots in the future 
-movie. “Too much of a good thing is a bad thing. But only for your customers.” 
+Quark: yes, and it's high time we merged the two sub-plots in the future
+movie. “Too much of a good thing is a bad thing. But only for your customers”.
 Rule of acquisition No. 172.
 
 </s>
 Dax: Captain, it seems Quark has been distributing the movie from our trip.
 
 Sisko: tell me about it. Sub-space is abuzz with it, and Star Fleet HQ
-won't give me a rest. I'm going to kill this Ferengi.
+won't give me a rest. I'm going to kill that Ferengi.
 
 Dax: I suppose that's what Q wanted all along.
 
 Jake: So what are you so busy writing?
 
 Katie: a story, actually, based on something that happened to us on Othello
-Task Force. I took your advice and am writing about real occurences.
+Task Force. I took your advice and am writing about real events.
 
 Jake: can I read?
 

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-Currently documentation is a little lacking.
+Currently, documentation is a little lacking.
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+<a href="http://freshmeat.net/projects/abc-path-solver">Freshmeat.net Record</a>
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