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Shlomi Fish committed 8c06cf4

[ST-WTLD] some corrections.

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lib/screenplay-xml/txt/star-trek--we-the-living-dead.txt

 Worf: Commander Dax, I explicitly prohibit you from asking about Mr. Q’s
 role as a husband or a father.
 
-Jadzia: You are right, Commander. I’ve realised something: through all this trip
-through the wonders of the Q’s continuum I’ve been far too selfish and only
-thought about myself. I should have thought about you, too.
+Jadzia: You are right, Commander. I’ve realised something: throughout this
+whole trip through the wonders of the Q’s continuum I’ve been far too selfish
+and only thought about myself. I should have thought about you, too.
 
 [She turns towards Avigayil]
 
 using weapons. But I possessed a far different and far more effective weapon -
 my words and deeds.
 
-+++: you see: I was able to convince people; to compromise with them; to
-even become convinced. And we would spare the bloodshed, and would both win.
++++: you see: I was able to convince people; to compromise with them; even
+to become convinced. And we would spare the bloodshed, and would both win.
 
 +++: the Living Dead Klingons have little use for hurting ourselves physically,
 and instead we worked on advancing our technology, and reaching the other

t2/humour/Star-Trek/We-the-Living-Dead/ongoing-text.html.wml

 <link rel="stylesheet" href="$(ROOT)/screenplay.css" type="text/css" media="screen, projection" />
 </page_extra_head_elements>
 
-#include "screenplay-xml/rendered-html/star-trek--we-the-living-dead.html"
+<include file="../lib/screenplay-xml/rendered-html/star-trek--we-the-living-dead.html" verbatim=true />