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Shlomi Fish  committed 9de55bd

Corrections - thanks to some people on IRC.

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 <h2 id="empowering_youth">How Technology is Empowering Youth</h2>
 
 <p>
-During the middle ages, the apprentices of craftsmen graduated to become
+During the Middle Ages, the apprentices of craftsmen graduated to become
 masters, and started their own shops and then married, at a much younger age
 than 18. Today, most people graduate from high school at that age,
 and are expected to remain disadvantaged until then. Like it or
-not, there is not a good reason why the youth of today should not be able to
-contribute to make useful contributions to arts, sciences, philosophy, and
+not, there is not a good reason why the youth of today should not be able
+to make useful contributions to arts, sciences, philosophy, and
 entertainment, despite their young age and inexperience.
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 <p>
-Back in the 18th century,
+In the 18th century,
 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carl_Friedrich_Gauss">Carl Friedrich
 Gauss</a> started making important contributions to mathematics from a very
 early age.
 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marlee_Matlin">Marlee Matlin</a> won
 it when she was 21 years old, back in 1986, but it was an isolated case. ).
 I anticipate, and hope, that Lawrence’s winning will bring forth
-a generation where some even younger film makers, receive the Academy Awards.
+an age where some even younger film makers, receive the Academy Awards.
 Perhaps as young as being 10 years old - perhaps younger.
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-<h3 id="revealing_offending_details">Why are you revealing offending details
+<h3 id="revealing_incriminating_details">Why are you revealing incriminating
+details
 about yourself? This makes you look bad for potential employers?</h3>
 
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