-A supernatural dramedie, this screenplay has many ties to my other screenplay,
+This is a parody of the telvision series
+<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Buffy_the_Vampire_Slayer_%28TV_series%29">Buffy the Vampire Slayer</a>, while referencing other pieces of popular culture
+and references, and has many ties ties to my other screenplay,
<a href="$(ROOT)/humour/Star-Trek/We-the-Living-Dead/">Star Trek: “We, the
-Living Dead”</a>, and was part of the grand Star Trek Deep Space Nine /
-Buffy the Vampire Slayer / etc. great conspiracy theory thing that I imagined
-in my “grand mania” that has inspired me ever since. It’s very
-far-fetched, but on the other hand conveys many serious messages and insights.
+Living Dead”</a>. It’s far-fetched, but, on the other hand, conveys some
+serious messages and insights.