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 Jennifer is a trendy and popular high school senior who is living and
 studying in the vicinity of Los Angeles. Her best friend, Taylor convinces her
 to attempt to become a developer of open source software. Taylor puts her
-under the tutorship of his other friend, the female open source contributor
-Eve, who prefers to be called “Erisa”, and who is a self-conscious and
-rebelling punk, with whom Jennifer finds it hard to deal. Jennifer remains
+under the tutorship of a different friend of his, the female open source
+contributor Eve, who prefers to be called “Erisa”, and who is a self-conscious
+and rebelling punk, with whom Jennifer finds it hard to deal. Jennifer remains
 determined to learn how to become an open source developer from Eve, but
-there are several surprises along the road.
+there are some surprises along the road.
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