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-Well, Selina has to be an Englishwoman, right? OK, otherwise I feel that
+Well, Selina has to be an Englishwoman, right? Otherwise, I feel that
 Selina is similar enough to
 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hermione_Granger">Hermione Granger</a>
-to warrant it. Furthermore,
-<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keira_Knightley">Keira Knightley</a> plays
-the kind of females, who cause the room to miss a beat, which isn't what I
-want for Selina, who should be the kind of girl that people can still find
-as similar to themselves.
+to warrant Ms. Watson playing her. Furthermore,
+<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keira_Knightley">Keira Knightley</a>
+plays the kind of females, who cause the room to miss a beat when they
+are seen, which isn't what I want for Selina, who should be the kind of girl
+that people can still relate to.
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