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[Perfect Workplace] Went over a section and corrected some typos.

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                     <title>Case Study</title>
                 </info>
                 <para>
-                    I once been to a job interview in downtown Tel-Aviv,
+                    I once went to a job interview in downtown Tel-Aviv,
                     which went very well. Then I received a phone call from
                     them that they want me to come and install Fedora Linux
                     on the computer. I did that, and next thing I knew, I was
                 <para>
                     I was instructed to write a mail-processing framework
                     in PHP. Now since I know and love Perl, I know there
-                    are many fine modules for doing that on <link xlink:href="http://sial.org/howto/perl/life-with-cpan/">CPAN (= The 
+                    are many fine modules for doing that on <link xlink:href="http://perl-begin.org/topics/cpan/">CPAN (= The 
                         Comprensive Perl Archive Network)</link>, but there
                     was little of subtantial quality for PHP. At a certain
                     time I needed to register at a site, to download the
-                    latest version of a PHP library, that was free software,
-                    because the download required authentication. There didn't
-                    seem to be anything better.
+                    latest version of a PHP library, that was open-source
+                    software, because the download required authentication
+                    . There didn't seem to be anything better.
                 </para>
                 <para>
                     I was told that they would prefer to write everything
                 <para>
                     With my PHP code barely working and prune to many errors,
                     I decided to quit after about a month, out of being
-                    appalled by the bad code craftmanship I had done there.
-                    Make sure you don't repeat such a mistake.
+                    appalled by the bad code craftmanship I had achieved
+                    there. Make sure you don't repeat such a mistake.
                 </para>
             </section>
         </section>
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