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[TOWTF] Various phrasing/spelling/etc. fixes

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 Keating: We'll send Gail your regards.
 
-Pedro: Thanks man.
+Pedro: Thanks, man!
 
 [Cut. It's afternoon and Roark and Keating are walking in the middle of the desert.]
 
 
 Roark: As you wish, Peter.
 
-[Suddenly, many Indians spring from various hiding places around the two, aiming them guns and arrows at them. Roark and Keating see them and quickly raise their hands. The Indian chief singals them to move to the right, and the two walk that way, followed by several armed Indians who are guarding them.]
+[Suddenly, many Indians spring from various hiding places around the two, aiming guns and loaded bows at them. Roark and Keating see them and quickly raise their hands. The Indian chief signals them to move to the right, and the two walk that way, followed by several armed Indians who are guarding them.]
 
 Keating: Do you suppose Gail has anything to do with it?
 
 
 Roark: Thanks.
 
-[Later that night. Roark, Keating and Wynand are in the middle of the dessert.]
+[Later that night. Roark, Keating and Wynand are in the middle of the desert.]
 
 Keating: OK, Gail, I think we lost them. Roark and I have to cross the Rio-Grande, so you'll probably want to stay here.
 
 
 Roark: You have to understand that I can't let this relationship interfere with my work.
 
-Dominique: Well, if you feel this way...
+Dominique: My father warned me about men. He said "they are all the same, including me", but I thought some men are different…
 
 [They continue arguing. Cut to the corridor, Keating and Catherine enter it from the deck.]
 
 
 Dominique: Aren't you guys going to ... you know?
 
-Catherine: Oh no. We decided that we'll give me time to get along with Peter's mother, and stuff. And then, one quite night, when we're both composed and relaxed... In any case, right now we want to spend some time with our friends.
+Catherine: Oh no. We decided that we'll give me time to get along with Peter's mother, and stuff. And then, one quite night, when we're both composed and relaxed… In any case, right now we want to spend some time with our friends.
 
-Wynand: You know, I think I'm going to marry Elizabeth too. I never liked a woman so much since the crash I had in Judith Rodring in the tenth grade.
+Wynand: You know, I think I'm going to marry Elizabeth too. I never liked a woman so much since the crash I had on Judith Rodring in the tenth grade.
 
 Roark: Gail, you didn't go to high school.
 
 
 Monica: The end?
 
-Joey: Let's make those cool epilogues.
+Joey: Yeah, I guess. Now let's make those cool epilogues.
 
 Ross: OK. After five years, Roark felt that he reached saturation as an architect [cut to an excavation site] so he and Cameron went to pioneer the field of paleontology.
 
 
 Toohey: Did you want to see me, Mr. Wynand?
 
-Wynand: Yes. Please have a sit. 
+Wynand: Yes. Please have a seat. 
 
 [Toohey sits down.]
 
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