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 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phoenician_language">the Phoenician
 language</a>, and later on adopted in various variations by languages of
 close proximity, including Greek, Aramaic, and Hebrew (which started as a
-dialect of the proper Canaanite language), it seemed like a crude, sloppy,
-hard-to-read glyph system, that was used and abused for writing about some
+dialect of the proper Canaanite language), it seemed like a poor man and
+low-culture glyph system, that was used and abused for writing about some
 really low-life topics: drinking, being happy and jolly, spreading vicious
 rumours, erotica, depictions of violence, silly jokes, and even blatant
 descriptions of incest.