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 <p>
 You can explore the site using the <a href="#navbar"><b>navigation bar</b></a> 
 to the 
-left.  Alternatively, you can traverse it page by page using the <b>arrows at 
-the top</b>. Alternatively see <a href="#news">this site's <b>news feed</b></a>
-for what's new here.
+left.  Alternatively, you can traverse it page-by-page using the <b>arrows at 
+the top</b>. There's also <a href="#news">a <b>news feed</b></a> for what's 
+new on the site, which is updated periodically.
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 <p>
-I have other unfinished stories.
+I have some other unfinished stories.
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 <p>
 <a href="$(ROOT)/humour/fortunes/shlomif-fav.html#neo-tech-selfishness">does
 not imply selfishness</a>, by the way, but rather "Rational Self-Growth".)
 My expertise as a software developer (in many fields), and my interest
-in philosophy, history, software management, and other fields also contribute
-to my essays and articles.
+in philosophy, history, software management, and other fields also provide
+fodder for my essays and articles.
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