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 <para>
 Syria ended up disarming all political armed
 organisations out of their weapons, except for the 
-<link xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hezbollah">Hizbullah</link> (in Arabic
-“Party of God”), which is a Shi’ite Muslim activist organisation, backed by 
-Syria
-and Iran, which was instructed to attack Israel. (Syria likely
+<link xlink:href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hezbollah">Hizbullah</link>
+(“Party of God” in Arabic), which is a Shi’ite Muslim activist organisation,
+backed by Syria and Iran, which was instructed to attack Israel. (Syria likely
 desired it to operate in this manner, to put pressure on Israel to return 
 the Golan Heights to Syria.). Israel, in turn, did extensive aerial and other
 attacks on Lebanon, in order to retaliate against the Hizbullah.
         While he considers himself a Randian Objectivist and a libertarian,
         he feels free to deviate or even criticise his peers and mentors based
         on reason, progress and other sources of enlightenment and believes
-        that as existence is dynamic, they will involve, combined, and
+        that as existence is dynamic, they will evolve, be combined, and
         progress. 
     </para>
     
             I Helped to Fight it</emphasis> in 1996, when he was 19 drawing
         from many inspirations, and has continued to improve them since. One
         can find his other novellas, screenplays, and shorter works,
-        as well as essays and articles, on his peronal website, which he hopes 
-        to make available as electronic books in the near future.
+        as well as essays and articles, on his peronal website, and he hopes 
+        to make them available as electronic books in the near future.
     </para>
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