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     <info><title>About the Author</title></info>
 
     <para>
-        Shlomi Fish is an Israeli software developer, essayist and writer,
+        Shlomi Fish is an Israeli software developer, essayist, and writer,
         who is passionate about Free and Open Source Software and other
         manifestations of individual rights and freedom as well as honesty,
         transparency and openness, in digital culture, culture in general,
     <para>
         He maintains a personal web site at 
         <link xlink:href="http://www.shlomifish.org/">http://www.shlomifish.org/</link>,
-        which collects most of the good works of culture and code, that he has
-        worked on since he set it up in 1997, several weblogs and an otherwise
-        active online presence.
+        which collects most of the works of culture and code, that he has
+        worked on since he set it up in 1997. He also has several weblogs,
+        and an otherwise active online presence.
     </para>
 
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     <para>
         He has written the first few versions of <emphasis>The Enemy and How
-            I Helped to Fight it</emphasis> in 1997, when he was 19 drawing
+            I Helped to Fight it</emphasis> in 1996, when he was 19 drawing
         from many inspirations, and has continued to improve them since. One
         can find his other novellas, screenplays, and shorter works,
-        as well as essays and articles, on his site, which he hopes to make
-        available as electronic books in the near future.
+        as well as essays and articles, on his peronal website, which he hopes 
+        to make available as electronic books in the near future.
     </para>
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