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   <chapter xml:id="return_home">
   <info><title>The Return Home</title></info>
-  <para>Two days after the study day, I decided to return home, and therefore I travelled by buses until the northern border of the Enemy's country, in order to cross the border to my country. The last bus stopped right next to the border pass that allowed passage from the Enemy's country to the security zone in the south of my country, that as I mentioned before the Enemy had under its control. Actually, citizens of my country who inhabit the security zone make constant use of this border-pass, in order to work in the sovereign area of the Enemy's country.</para>
-  <para>The border guards did not detain me for long after they understood I was the citizen of the country in the other side of the border, but they advised me to get out of the zone they possessed as soon as possible. I took one organised ride that took me outside the security zone, and then I found another car that was about to go in the direction of my village and took it. After I went off the car, I walked for a short while by foot until I reached the outskirts of my village at the late afternoon.</para>
-  <para>The village seemed more deserted and the amount of people who hanged around its streets was smaller than usual to this hour. When I came near my house I understood why: half of my village gathered by my house in what looked like a party that was conducted for my return. After a few seconds, some people noticed me and their calls (“Look over there, here he comes!”) spread the news among the entire crowd. Most of them turned their look toward the street in which I walked and some of them even advanced toward me.</para>
+  <para>Two days after the study day, I decided to return home, and therefore I travelled by buses until the northern border of the Enemy's country, in order to cross the border to my country. The last bus stopped right next to the border pass that allowed passage from the Enemy's country to the security zone in the south of my country, that as I mentioned before, the Enemy had under its control. Actually, citizens of my country who inhabit the security zone make constant use of this border-pass, in order to work in the sovereign area of the Enemy's country.</para>
+  <para>The border guards did not detain me for long after they understood I was the citizen of the country in the other side of the border, but they advised me to get out of the zone they possessed as soon as possible. I took one organised ride that took me outside the security zone, and then I found another car that was about to go in the direction of my village and took it. After I went off the car, I walked for a short while by foot until I reached the outskirts of my village, during the late afternoon.</para>
+  <para>The village seemed more deserted, and the amount of people who hanged around its streets was smaller than usual to that hour. When I came near my house I understood why: half of my village gathered by my house in what looked like a party that was conducted for my return. After a few seconds, some people noticed me and their calls (“Look over there, here he comes!”) spread the news among the entire crowd. Most of them turned their look toward the street in which I walked and some of them even advanced toward me.</para>
   <para>So I found myself surrounded by many blessings, questions and shoulder taps, but aside from the basic reactions (“Thank you.”, “Excellent.” and many smiles) I focused on getting a way through the crowd to reach my family. After I got there at the end and stood in front of both my parents, I told them: “I'm back.”</para>
-  <para>After two minutes of blessings, hugs, calls and remarks like “How we missed you” coming from the parents and the more distant family, that stood by them, my father got to the point:</para>
+  <para>After two minutes of blessings, hugs, calls and remarks like “How we missed you.” coming from the parents and the more distant family, that stood by them, my father got to the point:</para>
   <para>“So, tell us how it's been!”</para>
   <para>The crowd slowly silenced and waited in anticipation to my answer and the next answers that would come.</para>
   <para>“How what exactly has been?” I answered.</para>
-  <para>“Oh, you know”, my mother asked, “how was the interview?”</para>
+  <para>“Oh, you know”, my mother asked, “How was the interview?”</para>
   <para>“Oh! I have a videotape with the interview right here. Didn't you see it?”</para>
   <para>“Of course! And to be honest, we asked someone to tape it for us, too.”</para>
   <para>“So you know how it's been.”</para>
   <para>“Well. So - how was in the Enemy's country?”</para>
-  <para>“Oh, the Enemy's country - that's an entirely different story. Yes. On the Enemy country I have something very important to tell you. In fact…”</para>
-  <para>“So get on with it and tell it already.” Called one of my cousins.</para>
+  <para>“Oh, the Enemy's country - that's an entirely different story. Yes. I have something very important to tell you about the Enemy country. In fact…”</para>
+  <para>“So get on with it and tell it already.”, one of my cousins cried.</para>
   <para>“All right, I'll get to the point: I came.”</para>
   <para>“Yes?”</para>
   <para>“I saw.”</para>
   <para>“And isn't there something else you would like to tell about it?”</para>
   <para>“No, because I assume you have already seen the speech I gave during that seminar in the university.”</para>
   <para>And so the reception returned to its course, as I frequently answer people's questions regarding the trip I took abroad. “Why did you visit the Enemy's country at all?”, I was asked after a short while and I answered:</para>
-  <para>“Well, the main reason was that I wanted material for my book. However, I integrated into it the collection of valuable intelligence information about the Enemy, in a manner that is not considered as illegal by the authorities. Although I managed to get a lot of information without many disturbances, the results I came up with are not very satisfying.</para>
+  <para>“Well, the main reason was that I wanted material for my future book. However, I integrated into it the collection of valuable intelligence information about the Enemy, in a manner that is not considered as illegal by the authorities. Although I managed to get a lot of information without many disturbances, the results I came up with are not very satisfying.</para>
   <para>As I made clear to myself, most of what I know now, was already known to us, or we assumed it was like that in the first place. In fact, if I wrote a report on the information I know about the Enemy, then 48 out of 51 pages, were already known to us before I took the trip.”</para>
   <para>“And what about the three remaining pages?”</para>
   <para>“Oh, they contain a summary, conclusions and a bibliography.”</para>
   <para>“Oh! I forgot to tell you until now, but I talked with out truck driver and he said he will probably be able to hire you as his employee.”</para>
   <para>“Very good.” I told her, “But, to be honest, I think of starting my own business. The money I got for the interview in foreign currency is considered a fortune around here, and it will certainly suffice for starting to build the business.”</para>
   <para>“In what did you consider to deal with?” My friend asked.</para>
-  <para>“Honestly, I didn't really give it a lot of thought. I'm so talented that I don't have enough talent to determine which one of my talents I should deal with.”</para>
+  <para>“Honestly, I didn't really give it a lot of thought. I'm so talented, that I don't have enough talent to determine which one of my talents I work at for a living.”</para>
   </chapter>
   <chapter xml:id="epilogue">
   <info><title>Epilogue</title></info>
-  <para>He sat on a chair under an arbour in a middle of a European-styled garden. He was a rather short man with black hair and a small and funny black mustache. The minute I saw him he already finished eating his breakfast, and he drank coffee and read the morning paper while wearing army uniform. It was Adolf Hitler. I decided to approach him.</para>
+  <para>He sat on a chair under an arbour in a middle of a European-styled garden. He was a rather short man with black hair and a small and funny black mustache. When I saw him, he already finished eating his breakfast, and he drank coffee and read the morning paper while wearing army uniform. It was Adolf Hitler. I decided to approach him.</para>
   <para>“Sir, ” I told him, “I am a big fan of yours.”</para>
   <para>“Really?” He said as a smile of pleasure came up on his face “I'm very glad to hear that. Come sit, I always have time for fans.”</para>
   <para>“Even though I'm not too fond of your actions as a whole, your contribution to philosophy was quite impressive.”</para>
   <para>“Pardon? To what contribution are you referring?”</para>
-  <para>“No; you should not be modest Mr. Hitler - you should not deny that you contributed a lot to the establishment of a thesis, which is one of the most important philosophical theses in the last two hundred years. Yes … It's obvious to me that you must be feeling...”</para>
+  <para>“No; you should not be modest, Mr. Hitler. You should not deny that you contributed a lot to the establishment of a thesis, which is one of the most important philosophical theses in the last two hundred years. Yes… it's obvious to me that you must be feeling…”</para>
   <para>“Excuse me again, but I don't understand which philosophical contribution you are praising at the moment. To praise me is, of course, something that is always desirable, but I also want to know what is praised. I cannot think of any special contribution which I contributed to worldwide philosophy.”</para>
-  <para>“Seriously? ” I called in wonder, “I never assumed a person like you will not know of something so significant that he's responsible for. Sir, you were one of the central philosophers who claimed that morality is equal in fact to 'no morality'.”</para>
+  <para>“Seriously? ” I called in wonder, “I never assumed a person like you will not know of something so significant that he's responsible for. Sir, you were one of the central philosophers who claimed that morality is equal in fact to `no morality´.”</para>
   <para>“Did I claim that?”</para>
   <para>“Yes.”</para>
   <para>“When?”</para>
   <para>Well, don't you agree that you are saying here that the morality, which one should act upon, is lack of morality?”</para>
   <para>“No. This is indeed my quotation, but it does not mean that I think the Aryans should behave in an immoral way. You see, in this passage I meant that the members of the Aryan race can, or even should, take those actions in their struggle against members of lesser races, or against Aryan nations which stand in the way of Nazism.”</para>
   <para>“So you mean a Nazi cannot kill another Nazi, but he is allowed to kill a Jew or a Negro, or even another Aryan who actively opposes the Nazism?”</para>
-  <para>“Yes, you can interpret it that way, if you generalise it from the international politics to the private plane.”</para>
-  <para>“Mr. Hitler, thanks to your response, your claim seems a lot more humane to me now! I take back saying that you claim that morality in fact equals to 'no morality'.”</para>
+  <para>“Yes, you can interpret it that way, if you generalise it from international politics to the private plane.”</para>
+  <para>“Mr. Hitler, thanks to your response, your claim seems a lot more humane to me now! I take back saying that you claim that morality in fact equals to `no morality´.”</para>
   <para>“I'm glad you think so.”</para>
   <para>“Yes. Yes. It can be seen that all the time you acted out of that ideology, and not out of the simplistic ideology that I, by mistake, thought you held earlier. There's definitely much more reason behind your actions now that you've enlightened me.</para>
   <para>Of course an outsider, who didn't have the chance to speak with you yet, could have reached the same conclusion I reached based on your actions. After all, Nazi Germany attacked and destroyed countries, that were mostly Aryan, and caused the killing of many, among them pure Aryans.”</para>
-  <para>I noticed he was opening his mouth to say something, but I did not let him speak. “Yes, I know it was done because those countries acted out of Anti-Aryan interests. Or just because their conquest benefited the welfare of the whole Aryan race in the long term. I will also not discuss much detention camps, `purification´ acts and other such organized actions in which a large number of members of Aryan peoples was killed. It's obvious that they can be justified by similar arguments.</para>
-  <para>However, I am interested in several hypothetical situations, that did not occur in real-life. I'd love to know how you would have acted in them.”</para>
+  <para>I noticed he was opening his mouth to say something, but I did not let him speak. “Yes, I know it was done because those countries acted out of Anti-Aryan interests. Or just because their conquest benefited the welfare of the whole Aryan race in the long term. I will also not discuss much detention camps, `purification´ acts and other such organized actions in which a large number of members of Aryan peoples were killed. It`s obvious that they can be justified by similar arguments.</para>
+  <para>However, I am interested in several hypothetical situations, that did not occur in real-life. I`d love to know how you would have acted in them.”</para>
   <para>He seemed a little pleased with my speech: “I definitely agree to reply to you, so you'll witness the moral purity of the National-Socialistic ideology.”</para>
   <para>“I thank you.”. I took out a notebook and a pencil from my pocket, and opened the notebook in its first page. “Let's start: What would you have done in case of an ideological attempt of a coup d'etat?”</para>
   <para>“What do you mean?”</para>
-  <para>“Imagine a group of activists, which was active until now in secret, that energetically opposes your ideology. It turns out, that because of an intelligence failure, a large percent of the population now supports its views and it has a large number of enthusiastic and active supporters that are active for the advancement of their cause.”</para>
+  <para>“Imagine a group of activists, which was active until now in secret, that energetically opposes your ideology. It turns out, that because of an intelligence failure, a large percent of the population now supports its views and it has a large number of enthusiastic and active supporters, who are active for the advancement of their cause.”</para>
   <para>“And what is the nature of those activists: Socialists? Communists? Liberals? … ”</para>
-  <para>“Let's say for simplicity that they are people of my intellect, only that as opposed to me they are sane.”</para>
+  <para>“Let's say for simplicity, that they are people of my intellect, only that as opposed to me they are sane.”</para>
   <para>“Okay. And what are their arguments against the Nazism?”</para>
   <para>“Well, they claim that the Nazism was meant to enforce the dictatorship of a ruling and a corrupt group. This thing is done by manipulating common psychological weaknesses and destructive mental tendencies. This political and social doctrine is based on a basic mistrust in the ability of the individual to decide for himself, and a total belief in the ability of the leader to decide for the public. Likewise it opposes the freedoms of the individual but believe in an absolute manner that the leader, who is also the founder of the doctrine, is free to do as he pleases. The ideology of the Nazism is, in their claim, incredibly subjective, and is based on superstitions that lack any basis in reality.</para>
   <para>They also have a criticism against you: they claim you are charismatic and manipulative, but incompetent for any practical purpose, obsessive and with a chronic lack of self-esteem. Your racism proves, in their opinion, that you are infected by the disease that you are spreading, and the number of yells that you cried out of your free will a long time ago exceeded the boundary of good manners.”</para>
   <para>“No.”</para>
   <para>“O.K., allow me to mention it: the leaders of the movement are pure Aryans.”</para>
   <para>“And what does this fact have to do with anything?”, the dictator said angrily.</para>
-  <para>“Did I say it has anything to do with anything?” I answered him in a question.</para>
+  <para>“Did I say it has anything to do with anything?” I replied in a question.</para>
   <para>Hitler looked confused. Actually, I was also confused. But I didn't show it.</para>
   <para>“O.K.,” he said “is there anything else you want to know?”</para>
   <para>“Yes. What would you have done if the percentage of the supporters was 20%?”</para>
   <para>“Likewise.”</para>
   <para>“40%?”</para>
   <para>He stood up from his chair and said: “The same thing.”</para>
-  <para>“O.K.” I said to him, “You clarified your position sufficiently. I understand your decision, because people from all the political wings agree that one have to take any measures against ideological activists whose ideology poses a threat to the proper regime. I'm sure that about a military coup d'etat, your decision would be completely different.”</para>
+  <para>“O.K.” I said to him, “You clarified your position sufficiently. I understand your decision, because people from all the political wings agree that one has to take any measures against ideological activists whose ideology poses a threat to the proper regime. I'm sure that about a military coup d'etat, your decision would be completely different.”</para>
   <para>“Wh… Wh… Wh… ”</para>
   <para>“ 'What' ? ”</para>
   <para>“Yes. What do you mean by 'military coup d'etat'? Do you mean some kind of 'Sunday's coup', where a couple of military officers try to assassinate me or something like that?”</para>
   <para>“Even better!”</para>
   <para>Apparently he did not.</para>
   <para>So I continued to present hypothetical situations to him, and to ask him what he would do if they happened. As time went by, he became more relaxed, responded with less emotion, and sat comfortably in his chair. It even seemed to me that he enjoys the whole deal. After a small hour I finished questioning him, and then I turned back the pages in my notebook, studied what I noted down for a while, and closed the notebook. I lifted my head and said to the dictator:</para>
-  <para>“Mr. Hitler, I must remark that beside your great contribution to modern philosophy, I am beginning to think you also have an extraordinary gift for diplomacy. Despite all the things you've said, I am still convinced that your doctrine is not based on the assumption that morality equals 'no morality'. You definitely allowed for millions of Aryans to fight each other, whether in battles between armies, civil mutiny or even gang wars. You've come to dividing Germany and even the entire Aryan race to two camps, equal in their size and power, which were willing to fight each other until dusk. All that I've mentioned was done for the sole cause of you staying to rule over Germany.</para>
+  <para>“Mr. Hitler, I must remark that aside from your great contribution to modern philosophy, I am beginning to think you also have an extraordinary gift for diplomacy. Despite all the things you've said, I am still convinced that your doctrine is not based on the assumption that morality equals `no morality´. You definitely allowed for millions of Aryans to fight each other, whether in battles between armies, civil mutiny or even gang wars. You've come to dividing Germany and even the entire Aryan race to two camps, equal in their size and power, which were willing to fight each other until dusk. All that I've mentioned was done for the sole cause of you staying to rule over Germany.</para>
   <para>But bloodshed was not the only act you defended with such a brilliant strategy. In the course of the investigation you reasoned how you would team together with Jews, Communists and/or Democrats in order to serve your interest; how you would agree to be the leader of a large group of clear anti-Nazis, in hope you'll be able to convert them to Nazism later. You even agreed to give speeches that boldly deny the Nazi theory in case it would have left you as a ruler.</para>
   <para>If another person would say all that, then most people would think he was the most selfish and power-hungry person they met. But because of your extraordinary diplomatic talent, I am still convinced you're doing it out of high morality, and for a noble cause! I don't have enough words to describe the deep impression I have from the way you said those things!</para>
   <para>Do you have anything to say about it, Mr. Hitler?”</para>
-  <para>Oh! I wish you could see the look on his face! Actually, I would have also liked to see the look on his face, but just then I woke up from the dream. After I woke up, I leaned on my elbows and looked outside the window. It was before dawn, a few minutes before sunrise, so the sky were a little lit to the east. Many birds twittered intensively their morning twit - the coldness, probably, did not disturb them much. After I looked a little at the village houses, in which most of the people where still asleep, I removed my elbows and lied down on bed.</para>
+  <para>Oh! I wish you could see the look on his face! Actually, I would have also liked to see the look on his face, but just then I woke up from the dream. After I woke up, I leaned on my elbows and looked outside the window. It was before dawn, a few minutes before sunrise, so the sky were a little lit to the east. Many birds twittered intensively their morning twit - the chill, probably, did not disturb them much. After I looked a little at the village houses, in which most of the people where still asleep, I lied down again on bed.</para>
   <para>“Damn it!” I said to myself “I was just beginning to warm up…”</para>
   <para><emphasis role="bold">End</emphasis></para>
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