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 I wish her a very happy and long life) go in a direction she chooses.
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-<h2><a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ayn_Rand">Ayn Rand</a></h2>
+<h2>The Importance of Human Networking</h2>
 
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 While being an Objectivist, I am going to make a surprise statement: Ayn
 each end up unhappy. On the other hand, in my parody, Dominique Francon
 becomes the president of the United States, Roark is her husband and father
 of her children and decides to pursue a career in paleontology having reached
-saturation as an architect, Toohey starts a new career as a saxophone player,
-and Gail Wynand transforms his newspaper empire into something more benevolent.
+saturation as an architect, Toohey starts a new career as an excellent
+saxophone player, and Gail Wynand transforms his newspaper empire into
+something more benevolent.
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 Furthermore, it is clear from the Fountainhead that like Howard Roark, Ayn
 Rand expected fortune and success to come to her at the time without her
 doing anything about it. In <i>Atlas Shrugged</i> on the other hand, all
-the characters including the protagonist Dagny and John Galt, are constantly
-travelling and networking. Like it should be. Today you can do the same
-using mostly (but certainly not exclusively) Internet means.
+the characters including the protagonist Dagny and the antagonist John Galt,
+are constantly travelling and networking. Like it should be. Today you can do
+the same using mostly (but certainly not exclusively) Internet means.
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