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 <h2 id="my-authority">From What Authority I Speak?</h2>
 
 <p>
-Before I go on to the easy solution from saving Tel Aviv or whatever from the
-evil wrath of Iran, let me tell you what is my authority. Simply put,
-I am the most powerful man on Earth on the simple grounds that
+Before I go on to the easy solutions for saving Tel Aviv or whatever from the
+evil wrath of the Iranian leadership, let me tell you what is my authority.
+Simply put, I am the most powerful man on Earth on the simple grounds that
 <a href="http://www.shlomifish.org/philosophy/the-eternal-jew/the-eternal-jew/most_powerful_man.html">everyone
     should think so</a>, and act accordingly. Furthermore, I am not only
 the Messiah, but
     “Little Red Riding Hood” of Messiahs</a>, because I think the Messiah
 will come when everyone assumes his role. And I've played the role of
 <a
-    href="http://buffyfanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Selina_Mandrake_-_The_Slayer#The_Invisible">“the Invisible”</a> for far too long, which resulted in me
+    href="http://buffyfanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Selinaverse#The_Invisible">“the Invisible”</a> for far too long, which resulted in me
 being occasionally unhappy, and other people being unhappy with me and many
 people dying.
 </p>
 </p>
 
 <p>
-All that put aside, as ego-maniacal, megalomaniac and self-promoting that I
-can get (and I can get very much so), and that I like to be acknowledged
+All that put aside: as ego-maniacal, megalomaniac, and self-promoting, that I
+can get (and I can get very much so), and although I like to be acknowledged
 or respected for the works I've created and for my insights, I don't need to
 be worshipped, and I need people who are more than fans (and God save me from
 <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sycophancy">sycophants</a>), who wish
-to build upon my works, take them in different directions, parody them, provide
-useful criticism (even one phrased destructively) or even try to out-compete
+to <b>build upon</b> my works, take them in different directions, parody them, provide
+useful criticism (even one phrased destructively), or even try to out-compete
 me. See what Lawrence Lessig <a
     href="http://teachingopensource.org/index.php/How_to_start_contributing_to_or_using_Open_Source_Software#Some_Mental_Preparation">wrote
     about it in his book - <i>Remix</i></a>.