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 <p>
-Welcome to the Vim Beginners’ Site. This site aims to link to and host the
-best online and offline resources for learning the
-<a href="http://www.vim.org/">The Vim Text Editor</a>, an open-source,
-cross-platform, powerful and configurable, yet not too difficult to become productive with,
-text editor.
+<a href="http://www.vim.org/">The Vim Text Editor</a> is an open-source
+(and free-of-charge) text editor, which is cross-platform, powerful,
+configurable, and yet not too difficult to become productive with. It has
+been gaining popularity, many of its users profess they love it, and has
+been the subject of several clones and emulation modes.
 </p>
 
 <p>
+The Vim Beginners’ Site aims to link to (and sometimes host or mirror)
+the best online and offline resources for learning Vim.
 Due to the proliferation of various resources on the Internet, this site
 is, while open content/free content (under the Creative Commons Attribution
-Licence), is centrally managed and controlled, in order to make sure it refers
+Licence), centrally managed and controlled, in order to make sure it refers
 to resources that are of good quality. It aims to be for Vim what
-<a href="http://perl-begin.org/">The Perl Beginner Site’</a> is for Perl.
+<a href="http://perl-begin.org/">The Perl Beginner Site’</a> is for the
+Perl programming language.
 </p>
 
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