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Makes some cleanup/review in gittutorial

There are some different but little cleanup changes to fix some missing
quotes, to fix what seemed to be an unended sentence, to reident a
little paragraph with too large a sentence and fix a branch name that
was referred to twice later by another name.

Signed-off-by: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo <cascardo@holoscopio.com>
Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>

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Documentation/gittutorial.txt

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 This operation is safe even if Alice has uncommitted local changes.
-The range notation HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable
-from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD.
+The range notation "HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable
+from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD".
 Alice already knows everything that leads to her current state (HEAD),
-and reviewing what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not
-seen with this command
+and reviews what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not
+seen with this command.
 
 If Alice wants to visualize what Bob did since their histories forked
 she can issue the following command:
 alice$ git remote add bob /home/bob/myrepo
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-With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation alone using the
-'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own branch,
-using:
+With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation
+alone using the 'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own
+branch, using:
 
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 alice$ git fetch bob
 
 You can also give 'git-log' a "range" of commits where the first is not
 necessarily an ancestor of the second; for example, if the tips of
-the branches "stable-release" and "master" diverged from a common
+the branches "stable" and "master" diverged from a common
 commit some time ago, then
 
 -------------------------------------
-$ git log stable..experimental
+$ git log stable..master
 -------------------------------------
 
-will list commits made in the experimental branch but not in the
+will list commits made in the master branch but not in the
 stable branch, while
 
 -------------------------------------
-$ git log experimental..stable
+$ git log master..stable
 -------------------------------------
 
 will show the list of commits made on the stable branch but not
-the experimental branch.
+the master branch.
 
 The 'git-log' command has a weakness: it must present commits in a
 list.  When the history has lines of development that diverged and