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SECDIR Review: Section 11 - Better English & Entropy language needed
Issue #33
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The text here raises some good privacy concerns and suggests some means by which these concerns might be addressed. However, the wording here needs to be significantly improved. There are extraneous articles and missing articles that make the text harder to read. The ambiguous comment about entropy that appeared in 10.3 appears here as well.
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#33. Added guidance to entropy.→ <<cset 5c607b7c12f2>>
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