OPSDIR Review : Introduction - readability of 'and' is confusing

While TLS is used to offer communication security between the Client and the user-agent and the user-agent and the Authorization Server, TLS sessions are terminated in the user- [O] the Client and the user-agent and the user-agent and the Authorization Server, [P] the Client and the user-agent as well as the user-agent and the Authorization Server, [R] readability; the initial version with "and" almost makes it sound as though all four things are connected, vs two sets of two. agent. In addition, TLS sessions may be terminated prematurely at some middlebox (such as a load balancer).

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