more succinct labels

Issue #80 resolved
Jeff Almasol created an issue

personal preference here, but captions for fields (e.g., "What's the name of this toolbar?", "What JSX/JSXXBIN file do you want to run?", etc.) and dropdownlist options (e.g., "Type a short text label", "Pick from the icon library", etc.) are a bit wordy for me. i guess i'm used to more succinct labels, especially for ui that i might be using often, versus more conversational ui.

Comments (5)

  1. Rafi Khan

    I struggled with this one a lot. It's hard to find something succinct and clear at the same time. Do you have any suggestions on copy?

  2. Jeff Almasol reporter

    lemme work on some suggestions later tonight, and get back to you. i have a bunch of practice with this stuff in my day job -- lots of internal debates about suitable text strings for ui. :-)

  3. Jeff Almasol reporter

    here's my initial stab at some revised labels. of course, feel free to ignore or adapt.

    Add/Edit Toolbar dialog:

    • "What is the name of this toolbar?" --> "Toolbar name"

    Apply/Edit Effect dialog:

    • "What effect should get applied?" --> "Effect name" or "Effect to apply"

    Apply/Edit Preset dialog:

    • "What presetfile do you want to run?" --> "Preset (.ffx) file" or "Preset (.ffx) file to apply"

    Set/Edit Expression dialog:

    • "What does this button do?" --> "Description of expression" or "Description"
    • "Put your expression here" --> "Enter expression here" or "Expression"

    Add/Edit Menu Item dialog:

    • "What menu name or command id should get run?" --> "Menu command name or command id"

    Add/Edit Script dialog:

    • "What JSX/JSXBIN file do you want to run?" --> "Script (.jsx/.jsxbin) file" or "Script (.jsx/.jsxbin) file to run"

    Add/Edit Scriptlet dialog:

    • "What does this button do?" --> Description of scriptlet" or "Description"
    • "Put your script here" --> "Enter scriptlet here" or "Scriptlet"

    Icon dialog:

    popup choices:

    • "Type a short text label" --> "Text label"
    • "Pick from the icon library" --> "Icon"
    • "Pick a custom PNG/SVG file" --> "PNG/SVG"

    labels:

    • "Provide 1-8 Characters" --> "Text (1-8 characters)"
    • "What Font Awesome icon do you want?" --> "Font Awesome icon name"
    • "What PNG/SVG file do you want to use?" --> "PNG/SVG file name"
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