more succinct labels
personal preference here, but captions for fields (e.g., "What's the name of this toolbar?", "What JSX/JSXXBIN file do you want to run?", etc.) and dropdownlist options (e.g., "Type a short text label", "Pick from the icon library", etc.) are a bit wordy for me. i guess i'm used to more succinct labels, especially for ui that i might be using often, versus more conversational ui.
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reporter lemme work on some suggestions later tonight, and get back to you. i have a bunch of practice with this stuff in my day job -- lots of internal debates about suitable text strings for ui. :-)
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reporter here's my initial stab at some revised labels. of course, feel free to ignore or adapt.
Add/Edit Toolbar dialog:
- "What is the name of this toolbar?" --> "Toolbar name"
Apply/Edit Effect dialog:
- "What effect should get applied?" --> "Effect name" or "Effect to apply"
Apply/Edit Preset dialog:
- "What presetfile do you want to run?" --> "Preset (.ffx) file" or "Preset (.ffx) file to apply"
Set/Edit Expression dialog:
- "What does this button do?" --> "Description of expression" or "Description"
- "Put your expression here" --> "Enter expression here" or "Expression"
Add/Edit Menu Item dialog:
- "What menu name or command id should get run?" --> "Menu command name or command id"
Add/Edit Script dialog:
- "What JSX/JSXBIN file do you want to run?" --> "Script (.jsx/.jsxbin) file" or "Script (.jsx/.jsxbin) file to run"
Add/Edit Scriptlet dialog:
- "What does this button do?" --> Description of scriptlet" or "Description"
- "Put your script here" --> "Enter scriptlet here" or "Scriptlet"
Icon dialog:
popup choices:
- "Type a short text label" --> "Text label"
- "Pick from the icon library" --> "Icon"
- "Pick a custom PNG/SVG file" --> "PNG/SVG"
labels:
- "Provide 1-8 Characters" --> "Text (1-8 characters)"
- "What Font Awesome icon do you want?" --> "Font Awesome icon name"
- "What PNG/SVG file do you want to use?" --> "PNG/SVG file name"
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I struggled with this one a lot. It's hard to find something succinct and clear at the same time. Do you have any suggestions on copy?