OpenID4VCI: typos in draft 10, Section 8 to Appendix C
8.2. Batch Credential Response
The format of the list of response parameters in the HTML file is broken. The markdown should be fixed (probably an empty line should be inserted before credential_responses
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8.3. Batch Credential Error Response, the 1st paragraph
with a HTTP status code → with an HTTP status code
10.2. Credential Issuer Metadata, the 2nd paragraph
The way the wallet → The way the Wallet
10.2.3. Credential Issuer Metadata Parameters, authorization_server
If this element is omited → If this element is omitted
10.2.3. Credential Issuer Metadata Parameter, the 2nd paragraph (the paragraph after the 4th bullet)
used to communicates → used to communicate
10.2.3.1. Supported Credentials Object, url and alt_text
The descriptions about url
and alt_text
in the logo
JSON object should be indented properly.
10.2.3.1. Supported Credentials Object, the example
"alternative_text"
→ "alt_text"
10.3. OAuth Server Metadata, the 1st bullet (pre-authorized_grant_anonymous_access_supported)
without a client id → without a client ID
11.1. Trust between Wallet and Issuer, the 6th paragraph (Client authentication)
the Credential Issuer may establish → The Credential Issuer may establish
11.1. Trust between Wallet and Issuer, the last paragraph
with Credentails registered with → “with credentials registered with” or “with client credentials registered with”. The “Credentials” in the context is different from the “Credential” in the context of VCI, so the first letter should not be capitalized.
11.2.1. Replay Prevention, the 2nd bullet
(as described in Section6.2. → Remove “(“ or append “)”
The Wallet is required to call the token endpoint again to obtain the access token.
If “token endpoint” and “access token” are used like this without capitalization (it’s natural) and it is allowed, all occurrences of “Token Endpoint” and “Access Token” in the document should be changed to “token endpoint” and “access token”.
11.2.2. PIN Code Phishing, the 2nd paragraph
process an Credential Offer → process a Credential Offer
11.3. Credential Lifecycle Management, the 1st paragraph
the Credential Issuer is supposed → The Credential Issuer is supposed
12.3. Multiple Accesses to the Credential Endpoint, the 2nd paragraph
the Credential Issuer may also → The Credential Issuer may also
is longer be valid → is no longer valid
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Merged in vci-typos (pull request #419)
[ed] Brushes up VCI spec and addresses issue
#1787,#1786,#1620,#1785,#1784Approved-by: Torsten Lodderstedt Approved-by: Michael Jones Approved-by: Jeremie Miller Approved-by: David Waite
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thank you very much! addressed in PR #419